Talk:Agnes Fay Morgan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:31, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:31, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for picking up this review. I look forward to your feedback, but there's certainly no hurry on my end. Thanks again. EricEnfermero (Talk) 13:35, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK
Image appropriately licensed
Link dietetics, pesticide, Alpha Nu honor society. Redlinks are fine.
By 1920, Berkley president David Prescott Barrows agreed to Morgan's request to separate the two divisions into distinct departments since they had different curricula, philosophies and faculty. Morgan became the sole chair of the Department of Household Science. Combine these two sentences.
Is Irene Sanborn Hall notable? If so, redlink her. What about Arthur H. Smith?
Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:54, 3 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I made the suggested changes to the wikilinks and sentence structure. Hall is redlinked on her husband's page, and Smith seems to have written some widely read laboratory manuals, so I think there is a case for notability for both. EricEnfermero (Talk) 01:09, 4 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]