Talk:Agreement on Friendship and Cooperation between Bosnia and Herzegovina and Croatia/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC) Review should proceed in a few days, possibly sooner. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Excellent here.

Infobox

Fine.

Preparation for war

"Bosniaks were also armed." By whom? The then informal-ARBiH?
No other issues in this section.

Clarified that it was the Croatian government. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Pressure and agreement

"Tuđman's Croatian Democratic Union (HDZ) party held important positions in the Bosnian government including the premiership and the ministry of defence, but despite this carried out a separate policy and refused for the HVO to be integrated into ARBiH." Separate reference please.

Done. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"According to Stjepan Kljuić: "we [HDZ BiH] were the same party divided into two factions and between two states." Capital W, please.
The rest is fine.

Done. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Aftermath

This section fine.

Conclusion

Excellent article! It is fantastic. Interesting bit of Balkan history. When the pending issues are addressed, I will pass the article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:27, 20 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The links in refs 13 and 38 don't work. --99of9 (talk) 13:44, 5 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

They reference encyclicals. This passes, sorry for being so late. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:58, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]