Talk:Ain't No Other Man/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:12, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

General

• One dead link

Info box

• Apply the flat list template for the formats, genres, writers and producers.
• Genres should be alphabetical
• Shouldn't really have references for the sources in the info box. They should be sourced in the composition section.
  •  Done The references were added by an IP. HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• artist Christina Aguilera, taken from her fifth → artist Christina Aguilera for her fifth
• done by Aguilera and Premier among with Roane. → done by Aguilera, Premier and Roane.
• Why are there refs for the genres here, aren't they sourced in the composition? If yes, then don't do it here.
• You say it's a soul song, then go onto say it contains elements of soul? Bit confusing.
• At the 2007 Grammy Award, → Shouldn't it be Awards? She wasn't inside an award lol
• Commercially, "Ain't No Other Man" was a commercial success; → Repetition of commercial and a derivative of very close after.
  •  Done The references of the genres were added by an IP. HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Background and recording

• Following the release of Stripped (2002) which took creation over the musical style of Aguilera, → What? This makes no sense at all. The album took creation over her??
• Aguilera explained that the break in her career took lots of her time, so she had a lot more to say about what happened to her life during that time. → She later explained that the her lengthy break allowed her to write a lot about what she had experienced during that time.
  •  Done

Development and writing

• On "Ain't No Other Man", Aguilera worked with DJ Premier. → Aguilera worked with DJ Premier on "Ain't No Other Man".
• make a jazz-influence material like that. → make similar jazz-influenced material.
• The block quote shouldn't have "" at the start and end.
• During the writing process, the song was inspired by Aguilera's marriage with Jordan Bratman, which happened recently in 2005. → Aguilera was inspired by her 2005 marriage to Jordan Bratman during the writing process.
• liked → ?
  •  Done

Composition

• Again, you say it's a soul song, followed by elements of soul. It's either a soul song, or a song with soul elements.
  •  Done

Critical reception

• Might as well tack the third, two sentence, paragraph onto the end of the second paragraph.
  • I don't understand much what you mean here?

Music video

• I did a slight c/e on this
  • Thanks HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Status

On hold until Sunday. I am going on holiday soon as please do this ASAP.  — AARON • ^TALK 23:04, 26 June 2013 (UTC)

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 10:32, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

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