Talk:Alberto Ruz Buenfil
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I think you've made a good start here. However, this would have been better if you had consulted some of Ruz's primary works, such as one of his books or magazines. Please note the changes I've made in organization, style, and clarity (note that I neglected to log in, which is why the changes are listed under my IP address). Note that I have also added much more hypertext than your original article, especially with regards to Ruz's interests in social movements and concepts such as the ecovillage. The main issue before putting this article in mainspace is making sure that the subject meets the criteria for notability. What is it that makes Ruz especially noteworthy? It is important to mention not only what he has done, but how it has had an impact. Also missing from your article is any kind of critique. Are there concepts that Ruz embraces that are controversial? Do his beliefs fall into any specific category? (For example, can he be considered as a contributor to New Age spirituality?) Hoopes (talk) 21:23, 24 November 2010 (UTC)