Talk:Alexandria Ocasio-Cortez/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Elliot321 (talk · contribs) 06:32, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Initial comments[edit]
Going to be reviewing this article, thanks for nominating it. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 06:32, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Review[edit]
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
- The endorsements for Crowley should have a better source than his campaign page - this isn't likely to be a major issue - and including sources for all the individual endorsements would be ridiculous here, maybe include them in the main article on the election (which also currently only uses this source)?
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- The only issue is the reference for the Crowley endorsements, if that's fixed it passes. If the issue isn't addressed within seven days, I'll fail it. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 07:06, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Elliot321: The issue has been fixed. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 17:14, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: "people for bernie" on Twitter isn't really a RS either, though the rest of the additions are significant improvements. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 20:06, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Elliot321: I have replaced the reference. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 20:20, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: not sure if People's World is really considered reliable, but I haven't seen evidence that it isn't (while they obviously have a political lean, these are statements of fact). Passing the article. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 00:16, 31 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Elliot321: I have replaced the reference. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 20:20, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: "people for bernie" on Twitter isn't really a RS either, though the rest of the additions are significant improvements. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 20:06, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- @Elliot321: The issue has been fixed. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 17:14, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- The only issue is the reference for the Crowley endorsements, if that's fixed it passes. If the issue isn't addressed within seven days, I'll fail it. Elliot321 (talk | contribs) 07:06, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
