Talk:Amanullah Asaduzzaman

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Close paraphrasing[edit]

This article includes passages that follow too closely on the Banglapedia source. Compare some of the following:

"To realize the 11-point demand an all party organization of students of East Pakistan, the Central Student Action Committee held a meeting at Dhaka University Bat-tala on January 17, 1969. The meeting announced a complete strike to be held in all the educational institutions of East Pakistan on January 20, 1969."
"In order to realize the eleven point demand and to protest against the repressive measures upon the student-masses by the Police and EPR and against the violation of the sanctity of the University, the Central Student Action Committee, from a meeting held at Dhaka University Battala on 17 January, gave a call for a complete strike in all the educational institutions of East Pakistan on 20 January, 1969." (source, emphasis added)

The procession was heading towards Chan Khar Pool along the road in front of Dhaka Medical College Hospital. Police charged on the procession near the present emergency gate resulting in a clash for nearly one hour. In this situation, Asaduzzaman along with some student leaders tried to lead the procession towards the center of the town by the side of the Dhaka Hall. At about 1:30 p.m., a police officer, Bahauddin DSP fired his pistol pointing to Asad from a very short distance."
"When the procession reached near the then Post Graduate Medical College (near Chand Khan's bridge), the police charged upon the procession. After clashes for nearly an hour, some student leaders including Asad tried to lead the procession towards the centre of the town by the side of the Dhaka Hall. In this situation, one police officer killed Asad by firing from his pistol from a very short distance." (source, emphasis added)

"Asaduzzaman’s death changed the nature of mass movement to mass-upsurge which compelled The autocratic regime of the then President of Pakistan, Field Marshal Ayub Khan to step down."
"His death changed the nature of the student-mass movement and it turned into a mass-upsurge against the Ayub regime and its repressive measures." (source, emphasis added)

There may be other passages of concern as well.

While facts are not copyrightable, creative elements of presentation - including both structure and language - are. So that it will not constitute a derivative work, this article should be revised. The essay Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing contains some suggestions for rewriting that may help avoid these issues. The article Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2009-04-13/Dispatches, while about plagiarism rather than copyright concerns, also contains some suggestions for reusing material from sources that may be helpful, beginning under "Avoiding plagiarism". --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 15:11, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]