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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 20:17, 29 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Sorry for the long wait. I'll review this article in the upcoming days. Stay put! MX (✉ • ✎) 20:17, 29 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

  • No. of shows - Did you simply count the sources you found with the number of shows? Or is there a single source that adds up all of the shows he did in this tour? I ask because if you're simply counting the ones you've found, how does that guarantee us there aren't more shows you haven't found that could increase the number?
I put the source of the page on top. I counted all the dates from that web, removing the Fresno canceled concert.
  • Attendance - Same concern here.
The attendance is from this source [1]
  • US $77 million - Where is this cited in the body paragraphs, per WP:INFOBOXCITE?
I took it from here https://www.ukmix.org/forum/chart-discussion/chart-analysis/58272-most-successful-tours. I think is a pollstar data, But I don't know if is a reliable source, so I remove it. Franlm14 (talk) 00:29, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead paragraph[edit]

  • The tour consisted of 99 concerts and was attended by approximately 1.4 million fans. - The source says "The tour consisted of 105 concerts and was attended by approximately 1.5 million fans." That would have to be changed here and in the infobox.
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:30, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History[edit]

  • Multiple cities here that you didn't link. Is there a reason why? A lot of readers outside of North America may not know where these are.
Done
  • Following his concerts at Radio City Music, Miguel performed 21 - Is this the Radio City Music Hall? If so, please link.
Done
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  • performed live covers of Mario De Jesús Báez's "Y" and Rubén Fuentes "La Bikina". - How about WP:REDLINK for Mario de Jesus Baez? He has a Wikipedia page in another language.
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:30, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception[edit]

  • The Dallas Morning News writer Mario Tarradell found Miguel's show - link the newspaper.
Done
  • The Orange County Register editor Daniel Chang commented - Same here
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:35, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Broadcast and recordings[edit]

  • Two unsourced paragraphs here. I've added a tag for both of them. Please add reliable sources to back up the information.
Done
  • Auditorio Coca-Cola concert hall in Monterrey, Mexico - remove the link for Monterrey here and add it for its first mention in the first section.
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:32, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Notes[edit]

  • I added several tags to unsourced footnotes. Please add sources for them too.
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:31, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

  • 55. Fresno show cancelled - I find it incredible that you were able to find this source. Can you make it into a full reference format? I accept that this source is unconventional but given its historical importance I'd like keep it. I would specify the group, the person who made the notice, and I guess the date, etc.
Done Franlm14 (talk) 00:32, 30 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  1. ^ "Luis Miguel: Friday, Sept. 14, 8:30 p.m. to 10:30 p.m. -". Las Vegas Sun. 29 June 2018. Archived from the original on 14 September 2018. Retrieved 27 October 2018.
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