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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 00:39, 5 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Ancient Trader is a turn-based strategy video game developed by Slovakian video game studio 4Kids Games. → Sounds a bit odd to say "video game" twice in the same sentence.
  • "and Xbox 360" → "and the Xbox 360"
  • "one-year" → "year long"
  • "six people" → "six individuals"
  • "common board games" → A bit vague. What kind of board games?
Gameplay
  • Everything looks good here.
Development
  • "He worked with artist Petr Vcelka to design" → His name and title is already mentioned earlier, no need to do it again.
  • "Vcelka was "obviously" took" → "Vcelka "obviously" took"
Reception
  • "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon release." → "Ancient Trader received positive responses from several video game journalists upon its release."
  • "Most critics gave praise to the game's art design and gameplay but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards." → "Most critics praised the game's art design and gameplay, but criticized the lack of key elements such as a saving feature and scoreboards."
References
  • Everything looks good here.