Talk:Antonio Luna/GA2
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Reviewer: KevinNinja (talk · contribs) 23:15, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
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Lead
[edit]- Lead should be broken up into multiple paragraphs or reformatted to improve readability.
- "He was regarded as the most brilliant of the Filipino military officers during the war" includes a word to watch. I would recommend reformatting or removing this line, or including more sources.
Family background
[edit]- I believe that this section could be broken up, if possible, to improve readability.
Sources
[edit]- For the magnitude of text in some of the sections, I don't believe four sources is enough to qualify for GA status. More sources should be found from a wider variety of texts.
- There are 4 dead links in your article. Remove or fix these.
- Thank you for the input. I shall make the necessary edits soon. I think it has more than four sources, as reflected in the references section. Arius1998 (talk) 08:25, 4 January 2016 (UTC)
Final review checklist
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Sourcing is well done. Much improved.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Detailed, but some structural improvements are possible.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Pictures could go into more detail.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Well done; good article. Small improvements could be made, mostly in format and small detailing.
- Pass/Fail: