Talk:Aptiv/Archives/2017

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Request Edit to Senior Management Section

As of December 18, 2017, Aptiv’s key leadership team is made up of the following individuals:

Rajiv Gupta | Chairman of the Board

Kevin P Clark | President, CEO

Joseph R Massaro "Joe" | Senior VP, Chief Financial Officer

Susan M Suver | Senior VP, Chief Human Resources Officer

David M Sherbin | Senior VP, General Counsel, Secretary and Chief Compliance Officer

Matthew Peterson | Senior VP, CIO

Glen De Vos | Senior VP, CTO

Majdi B Abulaban | Senior VP/President:Electrical

David Paja | Senior VP, President: Electronics & Safety

Jerome Dorlack | Senior VP, President of Electrical Electronic Distribution Systems and President, Aptiv South America

Michael Gassen | VP Sales and President, Aptiv Europe, Middle East, Africa and Russia

William H. Guggina | VP, Global Operations and President, Aptiv Mexico

Sidney Johnson | Senior VP, Global Supply Chain Management

J. Christopher Preuss | Senior VP, Marketing and Communications

Elena Doom Rosman | VP, Investor Relations

Justin Fuchs (talk) 20:39, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Which parts are written like an advertisement?

Hi authors & Melcous (talk · contribs)

There was recently a tag added to the Aptiv page noting that some sections were written like an advertisement. Would someone be able to provide more context about the specific sections in question? From there, I will propose content changes that are more objective / factual.

Thank you!

Justin Fuchs (talk) 14:36, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

References

Hi Justin, the whole lead section reads to me like something the company would write about itself (and is in fact sourced to the company's own documents). An encyclopedia article should use neutral language sourced to what independent, reliable sources have said about the company, not what they say about themselves. Within the article, the dot point lists read again like marketing copy, even just by virtue of that format, as well as things like repeated references to "announcements" by the company, which again reflect the kind of sources that are the company advertising what it is doing rather than what is being written about it by secondary sources. The whole "Operations" section is another example of fairly blatantly advertising-type language. Cheers, Melcous (talk) 14:43, 19 December 2017 (UTC)

Also, I believe WP:NOTDIRECTORY is germane here. The guidelines state that lists of "CEOs, supervisory directors and similar top functionaries" is acceptable. The editor claims they are "key" positions, but the only reference supporting that distinction is the company itself and a vanity profile on Bloomberg. The list above seems inordinately long, so at a minimum, additional third party sourcing showing this keyness should be shown.  Spintendo  ᔦᔭ  21:42, 19 December 2017 (UTC)