Talk:Armin Frieder

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A fact from Armin Frieder appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 December 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Armin Frieder, the leading Neolog rabbi in Slovakia, was arrested for his participation in an illegal smuggling ring?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2018/December. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Armin Frieder.

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 19:39, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review[edit]

Doing... Will review this. Article is short so shouldn't take me too long. Stay put. MX (✉ • ✎) 19:39, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I will get to 2011 Matamoros mass kidnapping as soon as I can. Catrìona (talk) 04:34, 16 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

After attending several yeshivas – Can you link yeshivas here? I know it is linked before, but it should be linked on the first mention. Most of our readers will not know what this is.

Done

the Working Group, an underground Jewish organization – The body paragraphs mention it was an opposition group, but there is no mention of it being underground/covert.

Reworded

Early life[edit]

Frieder was born in Prievidza, then part of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, – DOB is missing. It is mentioned in the lead/infobox, but unsourced in the body. Please add it somewhere in this section with an appropriate source.

Mentioned and cited.

then moving to Nové Mesto nad Váhom; – moving → moved

Rewrote

before the war – World War II, right? I would mention that instead, since I was confused if the independence mentioned in the lead was a "war" too.

Done

had a son, Gideon, born in 1937 and a daughter, born in 1940.[1][2][3] – Might sound a bit picky, but is there a way you can spread out the citations so they back up the exact sentences they support? Having [1][2][3] at the end isn't very helpful for readers who may want to know exactly what source supports what claim. Whenever possible, we should cite immediately after a claim, per WP:PAIC.

Spread citations a bit.

The Holocaust[edit]

prewar acquaintence with Jozef Sivák, – Is the "with" intended? Or should it read "prewar acquaintance Jozef Sivák"? Also, please correct spelling acquaintence → acquaintance

This is correct, except the spelling which has been fixed

Postwar life and death[edit]

Armin had been slated to testify as the main witness – Armin → Frieder

I thought this is correct based on Wikipedia:SAMESURNAME? Emanuel Frieder is mentioned in the previous sentence.

Sources[edit]

Is there a reason why some of the books don't have URLs? I found several here, here, and here, to name a few.

I usually link to the url if I get the information from a free Google Books preview, but not otherwise, because it's not helpful to the reader seeking to verify the information.

Great, thank you for your replies. Article is ready for promotion now. Other GA criterias are clear. MX (✉ • ✎) 05:40, 16 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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