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GA Review

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Overview

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Looks pretty good from a lookover. Comments below.

Comments

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  • Prose - It is mainly blue-black above, apart from its white rump, and has pale grey underparts. above where? Should be explained here in addition to being explained further in the article.
  • Its three subspecies breed in the Himalayas and in central and eastern Asia, and winter lower in the mountains or in Southeast Asia.. - Ambiguous; "and winter..."
  • Sources - Look good.
  • Images - Look good.

Final Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Reviewer: ceranthor 19:23, 26 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking the time to review. Are the changes above OK - I wasn't sure quite what the ambiguity was in the second one? Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:10, 27 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I just got back from Maryland, sorry. Thank you for making the changes, I am now passing this article. Congrats. ceranthor 13:18, 31 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]