Talk:Babel Proclamation/GA1
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Reviewer: Tkbrett (talk · contribs) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
After writing a couple of articles about anti-German sentiment, I'm excited to give this one a go. I'll do a review by Monday at the latest. Tkbrett (✉) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
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Lead
[edit]- The proclamation was controversial: expand on this; the body mentions that the proclamation was popular among English speakers and unpopular among everyone else.
- Image is definitely PD.
Rise in anti-German sentiment
[edit]- Good.
Description
[edit]- Theodore Roosevelt needs to be introduced as "Former US President", or something along those lines.
- After World War I ended, the proclamation was repealed...: who repealed it? Harding?
Legacy
[edit]- An op-ed published in The Des Moines Register...: when?
- A hearing in the United States House of Representatives...: when?
References
[edit]- Checking against all of the sources, the article is well sourced.
- Copyvio score of 9.9% (violation unlikely).
Final comments and verdict
[edit] On hold: Eddie891, a nice little article which only needs a few tweaks. I made some copy edits and slight rewordings as well. Tkbrett (✉) 00:54, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks, Tkbrett, I've attempted to institute your comments essentially directly. Let me know what you think. Eddie891 Talk Work 01:24, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass: all looks and reads good to me. Congrats on another! Tkbrett (✉) 01:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)