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'Under Construction' tag removed.

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I have removed the 'Under Construction' tag from this article because it is approaching the content that I envisaged when I started. I would appreciate comments on its improvement from more experienced editors. The article was given a 'C' quality rating some time ago. What can I do to improve this? Ian (talk) 17:05, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

To move forwards you may wish to take this through a formal peer review for feedback on grammar, neutrality, formatting. Following that, the next tier is achieving the Wikipedia Good Article standard. --Jza84 |  Talk  11:20, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Recent changes

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I've made some changes to the article, mainly editing for tone. For example, where the subject is unambiguous, it's more approriate to refer to them by their surname. There were also a few instances of the word "we" as in "we know" or "we do not know"; this is rather informal, so I have replaced these with "it is known" or "it is not known" etc. Nev1 (talk) 18:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]