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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 00:51, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hello Kpddg, I'll take up the review for this nomination and will present it to you shortly. I hope you find my feedback helpful. Tayi Arajakate Talk 00:56, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for picking up this review! But I may be busy the following week, so please do give some more time to fix the issues. Thanks, Kpddg (talk) 08:41, 29 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @Tayi Arajakate, when will you be starting the review? Kpddg (talk) 11:36, 22 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

  • The old images should be tagged for their Indian copyright status as well. They have disclaimers at present.
    • I'm not sure how exactly needs to be done (I am not very familiar with images' copyright). Could you assist?? Kpddg (talk) 14:24, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I've added the tags myself. Tayi Arajakate Talk 11:24, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you Kpddg (talk) 12:19, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Assessment[edit]

  1. Comprehension:
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    (a) (prose) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (b) (MoS) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
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    (b) (citations to reliable sources) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (c) (original research) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) No copyright violation or plagiarism found; note there is backward copying. Pass Pass
  3. Comprehensiveness:
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    (b) (focused) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined
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    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) No copyright violations but some images. (updated) Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) The reviewer has left no comments here Neutral Undetermined

Review from Ovinus[edit]

Not sure of the processes for changing reviewers, but whatever, here goes. I'll probably be making tweaks as I read; feel free to revert ones with which you disagree. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

On first blush the article seems okay, but there is a fair amount of work to do.

  • "is known for its pleasant climate throughout the year" – Why is this in the first paragraph? Or is Bangalore really defined by its nice climate? What is Bangalore truly important for—culturally, economically, etc. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it has one of the best weather in India. Though it is changing in recent years. So shall I remove it? Kpddg (talk) 05:44, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Begur inscription is written in Halegannada (ancient Kannada), and mentions 'Bengaluru Kalaga' (battle of Bengaluru). It was a significant turning point in the history of Bangalore as it bears the earliest reference to the name 'Bengaluru'." Too much detail; remove. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 05:24, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "accompanied by his second-in-command Shāhji Bhōnslé defeated Kempe Gowda III and Bangalore was given to Shāhji as a jagir (feudal estate) and the Mughals captured Bangalore from his son, Ekoji I and sold it to Chikkadevaraja Wodeyar (1673–1704), the then ruler of the Kingdom of Mysore for three lakh rupees." Too much detail; just name the main actors. Unless readers already know significant context for Indian history this will fly over their heads (incl. mine). The target of this article should be people who have basic familiarity with modern India. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 05:33, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and remained the capital when the new Indian state of Karnataka was formed in 1956" Why would the capital change? Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    This is because, when states were being formed and changed after independence, the capitals of various states had changed. Kpddg (talk) 05:36, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Bangalore is widely regarded as the "Silicon Valley of India" (or "IT capital of India")" Ah ha, something along these lines belongs in the first paragraph (and still in the fourth, in more detail). I like this paragraph. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done: Moved to first paragraph Kpddg (talk) 05:41, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "A demographically diverse city" Can we be a bit more specific here? Is it diverse enough compared to other large Indian cities that it deserves mention? Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     DoneRemoved here Kpddg (talk) 05:47, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with a population of over a million under the Ease of Living Index 2020" What is the Ease of Living Index? If someone is "under" it, does that mean they are living in bad or unacceptable conditions? This phrasing seems somewhat contradictory Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    It is a tool that assesses the quality of life in a city. Do you want this to be removed from the lead? I have tweaked the sentence... Kpddg (talk) 05:28, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The government of Karnataka accepted the proposal and it was decided to officially implement the name change from 1 November 2006" – But you said later that it was renamed in 2014. Which is it? Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    The state government renamed it in 2006. The centre gave its approval in 2014. Kpddg (talk) 05:29, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • History section just has too much detail. E.g., "Within the fort, the town was divided into smaller divisions—each called a "Pete" (Kannada pronunciation: [peːteː]). The town had two main streets—Chikkapeté Street, which ran east–west, and Doddapeté Street, which ran north–south." We can discuss what level is appropriate, of course, but it looks like a slog, esp. with all the names. Ovinus (talk) 05:09, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Is this fine? Kpddg (talk) 05:51, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah. Was in a deletionist mood when I wrote that, sorry. Ovinus (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ovinus, I have replied to all the comments raised... Kpddg (talk) 05:55, 11 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ovinus? Kpddg (talk) 11:12, 15 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize; been pretty busy in real life. I promise I'll get to it by Friday evening. Ovinus (talk) 05:14, 16 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Okay Kpddg (talk) 10:25, 16 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Happy with your changes above. Continuing (am quite enjoying the article so far):

  • Put the actual Kannada names of "Bangalore" and "Bengaluru" in Etymology Ovinus (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done here. I've put the translation for Bengaluru only. Since in Kannada, Bangalore was usually not written, only Bengaluru. Kpddg (talk) 12:49, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "many lakes have been polluted" – how much and how badly is "many" Ovinus (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done: About 90% Kpddg (talk) 12:40, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The city government is making revival and conservation efforts" – maybe be a little more specific, or reword; feels flowery Ovinus (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Ovinus, I am not sure what exactly can be written in its place... Kpddg (talk) 12:53, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Hm, tried my hand at something more specific. Lmk if it's not to your liking Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "wettest months are September, October and August, in that order" – decreasing or increasing order? Ovinus (talk) 02:50, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 12:42, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As in the rest of the state, Kannada is the most widely spoken language, but English is a commonly spoken second language in the city." You just mentioned this above, so delete I think? Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 09:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to carry out low-profile jobs" Is the "low-profile" modifier here necessary or relevant? How about just "for business"? Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 10:25, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Other native communities are the Tuluvas and the Konkanis of coastal Karnataka, the Kodavas of the Kodagu district of Karnataka" – I don't really understand this sentence Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Ovinus, is this better? Could you tell the exact problem...I didn't get it Kpddg (talk) 13:21, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes looks great Ovinus (talk) 16:29, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Convert the "Important officials of Bangalore" table into prose—it's small enough. Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 14:25, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 2008, Bangalore produced around 2,500 metric tonnes of solid waste, and increased to 5000 metric tonnes in 2012" Only 2500 tonnes per year? check the figure; big US cities make millions of tons/tonnes annually Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done: The previous figure was from 2008, I have updated it now Kpddg (talk) 16:02, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    But now it says Bangalore generates about 3,000 tonnes of solid waste per day, of which about 1,500 tonnes are collected and sent to composting units ... as of 2022, Bangalore produces around 6000 metric tonnes of solid waste per day. which is self-contradictory. Keep the most recent figure only, and if you can add recent info about composting etc. then that belongs too, but always with an "as if" qualifier. Ovinus (talk) 16:22, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I forgot to remove it earlier...done now Kpddg (talk) 10:31, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Ye, that's what I'd guessed; looks good Ovinus (talk) 16:29, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The families living in the slum were not ready to move into the temporary shelters" – Yeah, I'm assuming the problem of abject poverty isn't going to be solved in an instant. Probably remove, or give more context on the shelter efforts Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 10:56, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Bangalore is one of the favorable business destinations" – Remove, or briefly explain why? Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I added a little explaination....is it fine? Kpddg (talk) 14:30, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "10,000-dollar millionaires" what is that :P Ovinus (talk) 08:01, 19 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 14:27, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

A bit busy again, sorry—it's finals week. I'll get to finishing the review by Friday. :) Ovinus (talk) 16:29, 22 June 2022 (UTC) Continuing:[reply]

  • "Its economy ... [is] industrialized." Do you mean industrial? Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 12:54, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "information technology, telecommunication, biotechnology, manufacturing and industries (electronics, machinery, automobiles, foods & beverages) sectors etc" Could we get a better source for this statement than [1]? Surely there's some good data out there Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @Ovinus, I added more sources Kpddg (talk) 13:07, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "host maximum numbers of Fortune Companies" What does this mean? Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done: linked to the respective article Kpddg (talk) 10:37, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "an economic growth of 10.3%" What does this mean? Per year, and if so, which year? Adjusted for inflation? GDP? Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Even I did not understand what it meant, and found no recent source, so have removed it Kpddg (talk) 10:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "second fastest-growing major metropolis in India" you already said this Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done here Kpddg (talk) 16:51, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Startup companies such as Swiggy, Ola Cabs, InMobi, Quikr, RedBus are also based in the city." [citation needed] Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Comment: This is mentioned and sourced in ther respective articles, but if needed, citations can be provided for each... Kpddg (talk) 06:50, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I think you can just remove it; of course a large city will have some startups. I'm a little allergic to giving undue credence to random small companies. Ovinus (talk) 15:26, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The city is an automobile hub" What does this mean, automobile production? Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, clarified it Kpddg (talk) 10:40, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would remove the last paragraph of the Economy section and let Economy of Bangalore enjoy such information; it's a really long list. Ovinus (talk) 22:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I'll remove it, but the economy article does not have all of this info. Would it be okay to put the same content in that article? Kpddg (talk) 10:43, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, that would be great! That's where it belongs :) Ovinus (talk) 15:26, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Quick note: if it's taking time, no need to link every relevant diff you make; after all, I'm checking the article :) Ovinus (talk) 03:51, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay Kpddg (talk) 10:38, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Spotchecks (uniform random distribution on [1, 307]):

  • [3]: Green checkmarkY
  • [6]: Green checkmarkY
  • [21]: Green checkmarkY
  • [27]: Green checkmarkY
  • [29]: Green checkmarkY
  • [40]: AGF
    • @Ovinus,could you tell me what should be done here? I don't know what AGF means (I don't think you're talking about WP:AGF!). Kpddg (talk) 15:53, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
      • I am :) I'm just saying that I can't access the source so I'm assuming you (or the editor who put the info there) did so in good faith. In other words, I didn't check the reference. Ovinus (talk) 17:07, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
        Oh ok..these citations are from books. Kpddg (talk) 12:58, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
        Indeed, and I'm too lazy to go to the library... in my defense it's 90 degrees outside... Ovinus (talk) 19:39, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • [41]:  Question: Maybe get a better source for this claim than a passing mention?
  • [65]: Fine, [66] contains the real meat. Please add author and date information to [66] if at all possible
  • [68]: Excellent Green checkmarkY
  • [73]: Green checkmarkY
  • [78]: Green checkmarkY
  • [97]: AGF (don't want to corroborate a table...)
  • [122]:  Question: "a few of them have lineage dating back to Krishnadevaraya" doesn't seem to be supported
I did not find any source, so I removed the statement Kpddg (talk) 15:58, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • [150]: Green checkmarkY
  • [153]: Green checkmarkY
  • [165]:  Question: don't see anything mentioning the 60% figure
  • [181]: Green checkmarkY
  • [183]: Green checkmarkY
  • [201]: Fine
  • [218]: Green checkmarkY
  • [224]: Green checkmarkY
  • [231]: Can't see how this is supported by the source
  • [244]: AGF
  • [279]: Green checkmarkY
  • [296]: Archive link is broken for me

Spotchecks are generally good. I suspect the errors are citation mixups.

  • citation needed for terrorist attacks
Each terrorist attack has its own article, so are citations needed? Kpddg (talk)
Sure, I suppose that falls under WP:You don't need to cite that the sky is blue. I'd link them, though. Ovinus (talk) 17:07, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Each attack is already linked Kpddg (talk) 12:56, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "60,000 people who have an investment surplus of ₹45 million (US$590,555) and ₹5 million (US$65,600) respectively" respectively to what? Also, put an "as of" for this sentence
This is the complete sentence : ...home to over 10,000 millionaires and about 60,000 people who have an investment surplus of ₹45 million (US$590,555) and ₹5 million (US$65,600) respectively. I added the 'as of'. Kpddg (talk)
The construction is slightly confusing: the 10,000 count is restricted to millionaires with a certain investment surplus? Ovinus (talk) 17:07, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Simplified the sentence to make it clear Kpddg (talk) 13:24, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Could we convert crore and lakh measurements to millions/billions per MOS:CRORE? Ovinus (talk) 18:51, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is File:Bbmp logo.png freely licensed? I can't read the BBMP website. Ovinus (talk) 19:39, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    It looks as thought it was taken directly from the official BBMP website, and no license has been provided. Kpddg (talk) 13:57, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I've marked it for deletion — DaxServer (t · m · c) 16:48, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "A rapid transit system called the Namma Metro is being built in stages" As of? Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    As of 2022; still being built Kpddg (talk) 14:16, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Kadapa (only operational till Kolar)" What does this mean? As in, the railway is already built further, but only actually works up to Kolar? (If that's the intended meaning then no changes needed) Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, it is still being constructed and not yet operational Kpddg (talk) 14:17, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Though Bangalore has no commuter rail at present" As of? Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:19, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The BMTC also has a mobile app that provides real-time location of a bus using the global positioning system of the user's mobile device" Huh? As in, the data is sourced from people's phones? I'd recommend just removing this; it's commonplace at this point. Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:20, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The main bus depots that KSRTC maintains" Nitpick: does KSRTC maintain all the depots? If so, it should be depots, maintained by KSRTC, Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    No, it does not maintain all stations Kpddg (talk) 14:21, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "out station buses ply from" what is an "out station", sorry Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Made it more clear, these are buses going out of Bangalore Kpddg (talk) 14:22, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Bangaloreans deem eating out as an intrinsic part of their culture" Well-known and consistent enough to state unequivocally in wiki voice? Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Removed Kpddg (talk) 14:24, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the Indian Cartoon Gallery (which doesn't even have a wikipedia page) notable enough for its own section? I'd trim and merge it into the preceding "Art and literature" section. Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:30, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • The stuff after and including Culture is a bit messy. I'll try to do a copyedit over the next few days. Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • what is the "multiple intelligence" theory of education? In any case, the link is a bit of an easter egg, so I'd remove it Ovinus (talk) 17:48, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:33, 1 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Author for [205]? Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 07:12, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mention statistics in Education, e.g., what % of Bangaloreans, Bangalorean children are educated? Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 07:16, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "At present, the UVCE is the only engineering college" As of? Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 07:19, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Professional institutes in Bangalore" As opposed to unprofessional institutes? Or is it meant to be "public" Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I've removed the detailed list, just like in the school section. These are mentioned in the respective articles Kpddg (talk) 07:29, 3 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The radio transmission was AM, until in 2001, Radio City became the first private channel in India to start transmitting FM radio from Bangalore" Unclear; I think it's supposed so say "all radios were in AM" Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:03, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In recent years, a number of FM channels" More precisely when? Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:44, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the cable operators play a major role in the availability of these channels, which has led to occasional conflicts" Relevant? Ovinus (talk) 16:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 14:06, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • [249] does not support the sentences before it and is an advertisement for the company described in the second sentence. Ovinus (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    This is [249]? Kpddg (talk) 14:13, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Oops. No worries, I removed it a couple edits ago. Ovinus (talk) 15:38, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where does [250] say that this radio was the first? Ovinus (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you tell the ref number...it has most likely changed Kpddg (talk) 14:12, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Oops, now [263]. It just doesn't seem to say that Air India Radio was first, only when that particular one started broadcasting. Ovinus (talk) 15:38, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @Ovinus, I can't find any source mentioning this. But AIR was the first radio available nationally in India,and B'lore did not have any radio before that... Kpddg (talk) 16:05, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • What makes [229] and [267] appropriate? (WP:SPS) Ovinus (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 16:38, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • [293], [290], [294], [257], [43] are not good sources Ovinus (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    As I've removed/altered several sources, the numbering you intended would have changed. So I'm not sure which source is improper. Like, 43 is now The Economic Times. Kpddg (talk) 16:26, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    [293] - Minsk Herald, has been replaced Kpddg (talk) 16:31, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Ah crap. I'm looking at [2]. And no clue where [43] entered the stage. Ovinus (talk) 16:37, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 13:40, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • [255] is broken. Ovinus (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 12:23, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any progress on converting crore and lakh to more easily recognized measurements? Ovinus (talk) 21:50, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    @Ovinus, which values should be converted? Kpddg (talk) 14:00, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    The manual of style says to convert all crore/lakh measurements into international units thousands/millions etc. Ovinus (talk) 15:38, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 16:10, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Couldn't find mention of Montessori education in [230] or [231]. Ovinus (talk) 21:50, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 13:59, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • commonly called City Taxis As opposed to... Rural Taxis? :P I don't know what this means, probably remove Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 13:51, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • significant number of international schools due to expats and IT crowd What is "IT crowd" Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 13:56, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • one of three streams – arts, commerce or science – in various combinations I do not understand this sentence Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    After students complete 10th standard, they can choose from one of these three streams. And in each, you can have different combinations. Like, in Science, you can select a combination of Physics-Chemistry-Maths, Physics-Chemistry-Maths-Biology, etc. Kpddg (talk) 13:09, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Ah okay. Ovinus (talk) 15:38, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Indian Premier League franchise Royal Challengers Bangalore is based on the city sentence fragment, might have done this accidentally, idk Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
     Done Kpddg (talk) 13:48, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • The I-League 2nd Division clubs FC Bengaluru United, Ozone FC and South United FC are also based in Bangalore. [citation needed] Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Since each has its own article and is linked to it, this too would come under WP:SKYISBLUE? Kpddg (talk) 13:50, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I think I'm mostly done. Will have to take another quick pass after everything is addressed. Ovinus (talk) 01:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've responded to all comments till now.... Kpddg (talk) 14:09, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Great! A few responses above and I'll skim the article again. Ovinus (talk) 15:38, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final concerns:

  • Still a failed verification for Since India's independence, schools for young children (ages 16 months to 5 years) are called nurseries, kindergartens or play schools, and are broadly based on Montessori or multiple intelligence methodology of education. None of the sources afait contain the word "nurseries", "kindergartens", etc. and they don't say that schools are broadly based on xyz theory, but that some schools are (whichever schools they are writing about). [3] might have something, but it's fairly obscure. Ovinus (talk) 17:32, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Removed Kpddg (talk) 11:32, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Regarding the All India Radio being first, we still need a citation for that being the actual first radio station in Bangalore. Ovinus (talk) 17:32, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    I can't find any specific source saying AIR was the first in Bangalore. So I have removed that it is the first. Kpddg (talk) 11:29, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]


After these are addressed, I think I'm happy. Since the original reviewer dropped out and this was essentially my review, I will procedurally fail it, then you can renominate it and I'll immediately pass it (so that it's marked as reviewed by me). Ovinus (talk) 17:32, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Ovinus, I have addressed them. Kpddg (talk) 11:33, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I'll actually just pass per comments on WT:GAN. Well done! Ovinus (talk) 23:39, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you!! The article has improved a lot. Kpddg (talk) 11:39, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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