Talk:Basic Education High School No. 1 Dagon
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Assembly Picture
[edit]Hi, is the picture Assembly[1] under subtitle "Daily Routine For A Student" from Dagon 1? I have never seen it anywhere in the campus. I left the school in the mid 90s. It doesn't seem to be from Dagon 1 at all. And it is not Dagon Thiri hall either. The caption mentioned "Student assembling in Dagon Thiri Hall" and it's not. I think it is better to remove it if it's not Dagon 1's assembly activity picture. Thanks. --Kyaw 2003 14:46, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
- I believe it is a picture from a time where there were still "sisters". Look at the nun and the students wearing blue uniform. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.170.46.129 (talk) 02:18, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
- The photo is too sharp to be old. And the microphone being used doesn't look that ancient either. And no building in Dagon 1 resembles the background building. I am going to remove the photo. 58.185.162.2 12:41, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the remove, it's a picture from India, I presume. --Kyaw 2003 13:30, 8 November 2007 (UTC)
Grammar and general tone
[edit]The English used in this article is terrible. Anyone want to start getting their hands dirty and fix all the grammar errors, as well as make the article sound more encyclopedic? --ZettaiBaka 11:50, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- I'm going to attempt the latter by dropping the bomb on most of the articel because it is:
- Terribly written, both grammatically and editorially (Completely biased sounding and puffed up)
- Very possibly a copy-and-paste from a (possibly) copyrighted source
- Unsubstantiated (And given the state of media of the country of the subjects origin and location, possibly impossible to easily verify or disprove). 68.39.174.238 (talk) 22:51, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
Fair use rationale for Image:Dagon-one.jpg
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Images
[edit]Other than the coat and "Mrs. Logie", does anyone else think the images here are terribly low quality, uninformative and of questionable factual accuracy? 68.39.174.238 (talk) 21:17, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
General update
[edit]I've cleaned up as much as I can. Also moved the article to BEHS 1 Dagon, in line with other Burmese public school articles. The history section is still quite weak; it doesn't read like an encyclopedic article. (For example, Mrs Logie? Use the full name, please!) The article needs a section on the campus and facilities and the cost of attending Dagon 1.
The alumni section: Don't you have any notable alumni aside from movie stars and singers? It reads as though Dagon 1 is a performing arts school when in reality, it's also produced a number of top students over the years. Also, starlets shouldn't be on the list. Don't just put anyone who's ever produced a record or starred in a movie on the "notable" list just because his/her parents footed the production costs.Hybernator (talk) 16:16, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
removing POV tag with no active discussion per Template:POV
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