Talk:Batman Beyond: Return of the Joker (video game)/GA1
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. I will start the review soon. Cheers, --Vacant0 (talk) 17:44, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
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General[edit]
- Missing space "
Doug Perry of IGNand Rodney Gall...
" → "Doug Perry of IGN and Rodney Gall...- Man, even after checking these things so much I still miss things. Good catch! Fixed 👨x🐱 (Nina CortexxCoco Bandicoot) 15:42, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
- I found a typo: "
The music and sound were also not without criticism
" – I think that this was meant to be typed out like this → "The music and sound were also met with criticism".- I don't think "not without" is an incorrect way of describing it, but I have changed it. 👨x🐱 (Nina CortexxCoco Bandicoot) 15:42, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
- Rest of the article is well-written. It is broadly written and it contains both positive and negative reviews.
Images[edit]
- There are none except the cover, although some gameplay footage can be added from here I guess?
Sources[edit]
- All are alright.
@HumanxAnthro: On hold until these two minor issues get fixed. Good job. --Vacant0 (talk) 14:16, 7 January 2022 (UTC)