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B class review

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This article meets the requirements for B class. You may remove the "Review waiting" template. However, there are some issues that should be fixed. They are listed below. After they are fixed, please ping me and I will assess the article as B class. Djmaschek (talk) 18:17, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Djmaschek. I fixed every wording problem you mentioned. And how do I remove that Review template? DavidDijkgraaf (talk) 09:47, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Prelude, paragraph 1, sentence 1: "invasion of th United Kingdom" (the)
  • Prelude, paragraph 1: "in the Republic" (in the Batavian Republic)
  • Prelude, paragraph 1: "Napoleon was impressed" (Napoleon was impressed)
  • Prelude, paragraph 2: "After a fierce struggle, The" (the)
  • Prelude, paragraph 2: "In the morning of the next day however he was again attacked by 19 British ships" (Ver Huell's flotilla was again attacked)
  • Prelude, paragraph 2: "but, had to retire quickly" (Who had to retire? "but the British had to retire quickly" or "but Ver Huell had to retire quickly" Be specific.)
  • Battle, paragraph 1: "On 18 July at 15:00. Ver Huell" (comma! (,))
  • Battle, paragraph 1: "Davout, who had had joined" (Remove extra "had")
  • Battle, paragraph 1: "came in to contact" (came into contact)
  • Battle, paragraph 2: "which had less guns and a much smaller number of boats at its disposal" (which had fewer guns and fewer vessels at its disposal)
  • Battle, paragraph 3: "managed to dislodge the them and" (managed to dislodge them)
B class. All corrections made. Djmaschek (talk) 17:52, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Djmaschek: I have accepted the article via AfC.Eagleash (talk) 22:49, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]