Talk:Battle of Hastings/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:45, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:45, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
- So when did the English fleet disperse? On 8 September when Harold dismissed the local fyrd?
- Probably better rephrased as: likely "was not used" at Hastings, likely did not happen at Hastings
- on the Bretons division on Move link to first occurrence and add apostrophe for possessive.
- This is awkward: The duke then led a counter-attack against the pursuing English forces which were killed, with some of them rallying on a hillock before dying.
- Typo: two brothers lead the pursuit
- Missing possessive? Although Orderic Vitalis figures are highly exaggerated
- Combine cites 41 and 42
- Need ISBN for Howarth
- Pics appropriately licensed.
- External links good, no Dabs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:16, 3 June 2013 (UTC)