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Reviewer: ErrantX (talk · contribs) 09:16, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Another pleasant Battle article! AGF on the source. Material looks fine; good flow & neutral coverage of the topic. As before very short, but neat and informative. Rather than laboriously list copyediting issues here I went through and made some incremental tweaks to the prose - just check those work. Also:
  • The lead needs one sentence summarising Background and one summarising Aftermath. Just to top and tail it

That's the only issue I could see --Errant (chat!) 09:16, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]