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This article is full of morally judgy statements - it reads like a copy-paste from a morality play, with words like heartlessly, piteously, 'unfortunates thus sacrificed' and 'providencial reprisals'. I would love to read the source material, but does not read like an encyclopaedia. Ideally, should be rewritten in more neutral, factual prose. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.64.219.178 (talk) 20:46, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]