Talk:Battle of the Bowling Alley/GA1

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk) 00:24, 13 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, always glad to look over another contribution to WP's Korean War coverage. May not be able to get to it in earnest for a few more days but thought you'd like to know that someone's prepared to pick it up...! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 00:24, 13 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, performed review and copyedit, mainly to reduce repetition and mix things up a bit. Just one remaining point under Prelude: The US 27th Infantry Regiment of the US 25th Infantry Division was mopping up North Korean resistance from the southern part of the Naktong Bulge area while attached to the US 24th Infantry Division sector when the North Korean pressure north of Taegu caused new alarm. -- this is a very long sentence, can we split/rephrase?

Apart from that, prose, structure, coverage, referencing, and supporting materials look good. A neat account of a very interesting battle; the early subterfuge by the UN forces was fascinating and you told it well. If you can just check I haven't inadvertently altered any meaning with my copyedit, and see about the above sentence, I'll be happy to pass. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:37, 21 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Changed it to two sentences. —Ed!^(talk) 16:29, 21 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Removed a repeated word but apart from that it looked fine. Passing -- well done! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 23:46, 21 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This article is beyond repair. Why so much information that has absolute nothing to do with Battle of Bowling Alley? Kadrun (talk) 04:55, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]