Talk:Battle of the Cedars/GA1
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GA review of this version:
Pn = paragraph n • Sn = sentence n
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
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- Prelude, P1, S1 (the only one): I split this into two sentences
- I also made a few other minor copyedits for punctuation, etc.
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- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Other than the minor items that I fixed (listed above), I could find nothing lacking in this article, so I am passing it. Great job! — Bellhalla (talk) 02:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks! Magic♪piano 03:55, 4 May 2009 (UTC)