Talk:Baxter Black

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Multiple Issues[edit]

This article has several problems, including:

  • Poor grammar, such as "he started to riding bulls" and "Life as a cowboy play a big part into writing this kind of poetry"
  • Punctuation mistakes, such as misplaced or overused ellipses and improperly nested quoted material
  • Stilted wording, such as "in Baxter's writing a few are to take notice" and "The stories told by Black don't have the authorization to be altered, and because of that the characters spoken in the lines have become immortal."
  • Fan point of view instead of a neutral point of view, such as "His charisma and humor were appealing to his crowds" and "He's a man that plays life by chance."
  • A list of "works" that doesn't give publishing details like what the item is, or when it was published
  • Seemingly irrelevant or ambiguous comments like "His last company let him go" and the "theme" that appears to say it's both important and unimportant to live the cowboy life

OldeMusicke (talk) 20:33, 24 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

 Done: I have removed these two issue tags from article. Fylbecatulous talk 14:44, 29 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I have left the sources issue tags; agree they are dodgy and some are just dead links. Thanks. Fylbecatulous talk 14:46, 29 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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