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First review

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Hello, very interesting and appealing article! I only made a couple cosmetic corrections. The only sentence I had trouble understanding is the following, but after a couple of reads I got the message:

" ... investigate how, in the sense of a beam effect, water biocoenoses in restricted areas can be developed decoupled from a complete structural improvement in the area concerned."

I wouldn't know how to rewrite it though. Other than that I enjoy your article, thank you very much! :-)

--Nora Sistemich (talk) 14:52, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Anna's review

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I loved the article, very interesting. I just corrected a few errors of punctuation. I would link the European Directive where you mentioned it, but I don't know how to find it. Nice work!

review

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The beautiful schematic illustration and the nearby descriptions are very nice! --Fuliyehuanshi (talk) 15:20, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]