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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this one shortly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
Background
  • "This made Athens their ninth appearance at a Summer Olympic Games, and they have yet to appear at any Winter Olympic Games." - "although" would be better than "and"
  • "Belize sent two track and field athletes to Athens, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade." - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Athletes
  • "...time of the Athens Olympics, and had previously represented..." - no need for the comma.
  • "...heats of the women's 200 meters, and was drawn into heat five." - no need for the comma.
  • "Michael Aguilar was 24 years old at the time of these Olympics, and was making his only Olympic appearance." - no need for the comma.~
  • "He was drawn into heat three, and finished the heat in 51.21 seconds, finishing seventh and last in his heat, and he was eliminated." - recommend splitting into two sentences.
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