I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
Per WP:LEAD, an article this size should have at least three full paragraphs in the lead. I'd suggest adding information such as her original conception, abilities, and her different depictions.
Done. Both images were reduced by 50%. - Bilby (talk) 03:53, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"August, 1988" --> "August 1998" - don't put a comma between months and years
Got it. I checked, and couldn't see any other dates in the text, so hopefully I found them all. - Bilby (talk) 03:41, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It might be a good idea to add the name "Holy Bell's appearances" as a title for the table (instead of a header) and float it to the right under the heading "Holy Bell". This will cause the text to text-wrap around it and reduce all the ugly white-space.
Done. I think it is a good idea - I might work on where to position the table within the text, but having it on the right certainly improves the layout. - Bilby (talk) 03:16, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Episode titles should be in quotation marks.
I think I got all of those - let me know if I stuffed up anywhere, and I'll take care of it. - Bilby (talk) 04:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Now I feel stupid - I completely missed the episodes in the table. :) Particularly dumb considering the time I spent playing with the table and hunting down a method for making it sit to the right. Thanks! - Bilby (talk) 00:16, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
There are also some comma issues, but I don't mind fixing those myself. I'll allow seven days for improvements. Nikki311 23:53, 17 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I'll get on to those immediately. :) - Bilby (talk)
I've made a pass to fix the commas - I'm aware of that being a problem in my writing, but I've never been able to get out of the habit. :) Any help with this would be much appreciated. - Bilby (talk) 03:41, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Hopefully I've managed to tackle all of the above, but if there are any more changes you find that it needs, or if I stuffed up somewhere, just let me know and I'll be really happy to take care of it. And thanks heaps for reviewing the article! - Bilby (talk) 04:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Great work. I did a bit of copyediting and have passed the article. Nikki311 00:19, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]