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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 11:48, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will take this one. Parsecboy (talk) 11:48, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • One dupe link
  • Image license checks out.
  • The first sentence in the service section is kinda long.
  • The first sentence of the next paragraph is a little awkward too. You might actually split off the bit about being transferred to the 1st BS and merge it with the next sentence.
  • I'd suggest "the enemy" -> "the Germans" - readers might not know who was on the other side. Parsecboy (talk) 11:57, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]