Talk:Bo McMillin/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR 17:38, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- The infobox image needs a caption
Done
- ""Bo" as a child was known as one to pick fights" - try As a child, Bo was known to pick fights (not sure if "Bo" needs quotation marks)
Done
- "In McMillin's day of iron man football, he was also a safety man on defense and a kick returner on special teams." - this needs a citation
Done
- "During his freshman year, McMillin was also on the track team; on April 27, 1917, he won the 220-yard dash at a Centre interscholastic track meet." - this too needs a citation . Hard to find one - the citation seems to be the medal
- " the five man backfield and the cockeyed T" - I have no idea what this means!
Done That's why they are called negligible. I added an explanatory note. Not sure what was "cockeyed" about it myself.
- The second paragraph in the Kansas State section needs a citation
Done
- Ref 1, 64 and 65 are missing access dates
Done
- The infobox image needs a caption
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- No original research found.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This was an interesting read. The article is well written and comprehensive, so once all of those minor issues are clarified then this should be good to go. JAGUAR 13:14, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks again. Any better?
- Thanks for addressing them! I've just checked through it again and it meets the criteria, so I'll promote this now
JAGUAR 21:18, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them! I've just checked through it again and it meets the criteria, so I'll promote this now