Talk:Bottle Pop

Bottle Pop is currently a Songs good article nominee. Nominated by MrHyacinth (talk) at 00:19, 17 September 2024 (UTC)

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Possible Vandalism

Can we like do something for the article?It's like,been vandalised(via blanking) twice (by IP Adress 94.171.126.131) and for some reason the discussion page have complete rubbish written on it.Can we do something about it? --HellFire (talk) 14:29, 13 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Single?

Was the song ever been released to radio? --MazurJacek (talk) 23:17, 1 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

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Nominator: MrHyacinth (talk · contribs) 00:19, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:54, 9 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Minor copy changes, but I found a chart error! Ping when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:10, 9 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead

It is an electronica song that uses sexual innuendo, and has been compared to works There's one subject: "It". Remove the comma (WP:CINS)
In the latter country, a remix, featuring rapper Devolo was released replacing Dogg for its local release. This is an incomplete appositive, but I think an appositive is not called for. Try In the latter country, a remix featuring rapper Devolo was released, replacing Dogg for its local release.
An accompanying music video for the song was directed by Thomas Kloss, and features the Pussycat Dolls performing the song in extravagant make-up and outfits. Remove comma CINS

Recording

Remember your MOS:GEOCOMMAs. (I fixed this since there was a missing space in the same section)
MOS:'S Unlike AP Style, we would do "Spears's". (I fixed this as well)

Release

MOS:LOGICAL When quoting a sentence fragment that ends a sentence, use logical quotesetting, e.g. ...can't resist".
Change "Vancouver Province" to "The Province", its actual title.
Remember your MOS:DATECOMMAs.

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 5, 21, 25, 38, 41

I'm not sure how to find the chart result on [38].
[41] is linking to the 2008 end-of-year report instead of 2009 and is missing Bottle Pop.

Images

The cover art has an NFUR. Encouragement: Add alt text.