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Note on sources

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The Frank Russo book drew heavily from the SABR bio. It should be viewed as a secondary source, IMO. Rory1262 (talk) 13:22, 11 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Brian Traxler/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 06:00, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Presumably he only got one start in the big leagues, since he only played parts of three games at 1st, and two of them were as late-inning replacements and there's no DH in the NL? Maybe find a way to work that in there somewhere, if it can be supported?
  • "In nine games with the Dodgers, he batted .091 with one hit and four strikeouts in 11 at bats." - move the link for strikeouts up to where it says that Tewksbury struck him out
  • "In 1993, he pitched two games for the Dukes, winning one of them, though his ERA was 11.57" - link ERA for the benefit of those non baseball fans reading the article
  • First paragraph of the NPB section is uncited
  • Move the link for the V. J. Keefe Stadium up from the personal life section to the death section where it is mentioned.
  • The last four sections are all extremely short. I'd recommend trying to find a way to condense these into two or more sections. The personality should be able to fit in with the personal life pretty well. Combining coaching and death may seem a little odd, but would a section title like "Final years" or something work for that?
  • The source " Chinese Taiwan language data" is a wiki and doesn't seem to be reliable.
  • The sole image meets fair use criteria
  • Other sources except for the one mentioned above look fine.

Good work, placing this one on hold. Hog Farm Talk 16:24, 3 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]