Talk:Bryan White

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I swear, I'm the only person on this project who knows how to write a decent article. This needs more info on his career — critical reception of each album, number of chart singles/#1's, his association with Pearl River… Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshellsOtter chirpsHELP) 21:11, 19 September 2008 (UTC) Oh, my gosh. i cant believe i finally found someone who knew,anything about Bryan White.I bring up his name now an then,people say:who! and i say BRYAN WHITE.You know he was such a wonderful singer,and i dont know where he went.I love the voice he has so please if its possible,Bring it back,I love you and so many other people do too! Now is the time for you,Look at whats out there,and you were always better! Angie —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.154.247.99 (talk) 01:21, 15 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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Facts in the article need to be supported by the references. The references just say Lawton, not Lawton/Fort Sill. If you have a source which says otherwise, you can provide the source and change that, but don't break the link. The article it is linked to is Lawton, Oklahoma. If you change it, it should look like [[Lawton, Oklahoma|Lawton/Fort Sill, Oklahoma]].
Words in the article have to be spelled correctly and have the correct meaning. 'Peeked" means:

  1. Look quickly, typically in a furtive manner, or
  2. Protrude slightly so as to be just visible.

'Piqued' means:

  1. Stimulate (interest or curiosity), or
  2. Feel irritated or resentful.

While we are on the subject of word meaning, 'befriended' does not mean "became friends", which is what I think you meant. It means to act like a friend by offering support or assistance. Did you really mean that the young singer offered support to the established guitarist and producer? Please assume good faith and don't undo corrections people make to the article.
Finally, you may want to read the policy about conflict of interest. A few of the changes you made spin the facts in positive (vs. neutral) ways and all of the content you added needs to have a verifiable source. Thanks, Celestra (talk) 05:16, 7 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]