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GA Review

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  • Rename "Plot synopsis" to Plot
  • "The Office—the show's" → "The Office and the show's"
  • """Business School" was" → ""'Business School' was" (single quotes)
  • "# ^ Gone Batty Entertainment Weekly, retrieved June 24, 2008" – the date is italicized here?
  • ""I got to the set and saw Pam's art, and I was like, "This is not right."" – missing a quote

Gary King (talk) 19:32, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've completed your requests. Mastrchf (t/c) 20:58, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Passing Gary King (talk) 21:12, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. Mastrchf (t/c) 21:53, 14 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.