Talk:C.F. Jabatos de Nuevo León

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clubs don't get founded into a division. A club might help found one though.
inferior divisions - "lower leagues."
1957 until 1990 - this is quite literally the club's lifespan - not required.
sold due to lack of fan support - probably lack of attendance, not support.
Deportivo Anáhuac is notable - should be linked.
giving the club its first win and first goal ever - redundant.
sold to the Tigres - who?
so for the next two years the club was used as a reserve squad - this isn't a therefore thing - needs exploration
After tieing in first place in the league with Jaiba Brava del Tampico, they played a tie-breaking match in the Estado de Martinica, earning the Jabatos a place in the Liga MX, the highest division of Mexican football. - they weren't promoted by being in the playoff match...
Directed by Paulino Sanchez and Alberto Etcheverry, the Jabatos made their presentation in the First Division in the season again 1966–67, ending the season in sixth general place - translation is off here
That year they gained the first victory in Estadio Universitario in a match against Mexican national football team.[3] (The stadium was opened 30 of May 1967 with a tie between Monterrey and Athletic of Madrid, later the Jabatos tied 1–1 with Sheffield United.) - need to mention what the stadium is, and why they were playing the national team...
The club's prestige fell - why prestige?
. The club remained in the first division until the 1968–69 season, after playing a three game promotional tournament in the Estadio Azteca, 1–1, 2–2, and 1–0 in favor of the Club Oro. - they were relegated due to a promotional tournament??
The next season, the team bet on having well trained young players as the basic forces of the club. - delete.
The whole last para is pretty hard to read.
The stats need explaining. Why only the premier League information?

I hope some of this is of help Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:39, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]