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Hello! My manager, who happens to be a current member of CalConnect's Board of Directors, has asked me to update the current CalConnect Wikipedia entry. Being completely new to the finer points of editing Wikipedia material, I managed to go in the other day and make a few minor edits by correcting a couple of links that had originally appeared as the full URLs (and yes, I realize I need to somehow go back in and document those changes). However, since then, my manager has suggested further updates which would really be considered major edits; for example, he would like to divide the article into more specific sections, such Introduction, Organization, History, and Technical Committees.

Because these proposed changes would involve such a major overhaul of the existing entry, I wanted to more or less appeal to the original author(s) to get their blessing to make these proposed changes. At the moment, I am only scratching out a possible write-up on paper, before I actually submit any changes on-line. Thanks in advance for your help! RensWriter (talk) 20:52, 14 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Article needs rewrite[edit]

Tripped over this doing Wikification work. The article itself is full of meaningless buzzwords and obfuscatory corporatespeak and needs to be rewritten in plain english. Just to pull out one example, "provide mechanisms to allow calendaring and scheduling methodologies to interoperate" is a completely rediculous way to say "Allow scheduling methods to work together". The entire article suffers from this and needs major work. --Jayron32 04:05, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]