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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Early career

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  • "Hayton was a friend of his sisters" - typo; sisters'
  • Wikilink goaltender
  • "Morris played AAA hockey with" - AAA hockey can be linked to Minor ice hockey

USHL

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  • Wikilink Bartlett, Illnois
  • "with the Chicago Steel and lived with fellow Steel teammate Robby Jackson." - repetition of "Steel"
  • "Morris finished the season with a 19-6-3 record" - the hyphens should be en dashes
  • save percentage, shutout and goals against average should be wikilinked for those not well versed with ice hockey terminology
  • "While playing with the Black Hawks, Morris posted a 19-6-3 record" - all the hyphens highlighted in bold should be replaced by en dashes
  • "and was in the league's top goals-against average and save percentage."
  • "he went undrafted in the 2015 NHL Entry Draft." - this sentence should be cited to a reliable source
  • "he was selected to the USHL/NHL Top Prospects Game" - state what this is for those unfamiliar with the honor

Collegiate

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  • "In his sophomore season, after beginning the season" - After beginning his sophomore season
  • Wikilink saves to Save (goaltender)
  • "to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
  • "in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
  • "becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
  • Wikilink training camp

International play

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  • "Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?

References

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  • References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
  • References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
  • The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per MOS:ALLCAPS

Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 19:25, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello MWright96. Thank you so much for beginning this review. I hope I have fixed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 2 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]