Talk:Cale Morris/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
[edit]- Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK
Early career
[edit]- "Hayton was a friend of his sisters" - typo; sisters'
- Wikilink goaltender
- "Morris played AAA hockey with" - AAA hockey can be linked to Minor ice hockey
USHL
[edit]- Wikilink Bartlett, Illnois
- "with the Chicago Steel and lived with fellow Steel teammate Robby Jackson." - repetition of "Steel"
- "Morris finished the season with a 19-6-3 record" - the hyphens should be en dashes
- save percentage, shutout and goals against average should be wikilinked for those not well versed with ice hockey terminology
- "While playing with the Black Hawks, Morris posted a 19-6-3 record" - all the hyphens highlighted in bold should be replaced by en dashes
- "and was in the league's top goals-against average and save percentage."
- "he went undrafted in the 2015 NHL Entry Draft." - this sentence should be cited to a reliable source
- "he was selected to the USHL/NHL Top Prospects Game" - state what this is for those unfamiliar with the honor
Collegiate
[edit]- "In his sophomore season, after beginning the season" - After beginning his sophomore season
- Wikilink saves to Save (goaltender)
- "to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
- "in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
- "becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
- Wikilink training camp
International play
[edit]- "Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?
References
[edit]- References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
- References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
- The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per MOS:ALLCAPS
Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 19:25, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
- Hello MWright96. Thank you so much for beginning this review. I hope I have fixed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 2 March 2020 (UTC)