Talk:Can't Be Tamed (song)/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:00, 14 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Very good job, not many things to fix at all:

  • Throughout the article you use "Cyrus's", apostrophes after words ending in 's' don't need another 's' - ie just write "Cyrus'"

Background[edit]

  • Source for writers/producers?

Critical reception[edit]

  • "...that always helps.", McAlpine concluded. - remove full stop
  •  Done
  • Link 'Disney'
  •  Done

Music video[edit]

  • Link 'choreographed'
  •  Done
  • "she didn't want them to wear scales and look too fish-like or too wear bird feet and look too scary." - rewrite
  •  Done
  • why do you link 'avis' (esp to a non-existent page)?
  •  Done
  • 'Video reception' section should simply be 'Reception'
  •  Done

Track listings[edit]

  • Sources?
  • Many GAs and FAs don't have sources for the track listings. I don't think this should be an exception. Do you really, really want it? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 21:11, 21 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't see why not. It doesn't detract anything from the article. I'll let it slide, but I strongly recommend that you add cites. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:25, 22 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stability[edit]

Declined – Not enough recent disruptive activity to justify protection. per WP:GA? vandalism is not a GA impediment. TbhotchTalk C. 04:12, 15 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, just a suggestion... Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:09, 15 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Media[edit]

I'll place the review on hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:26, 14 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Apart from the track listing sources, everything has been addressed, so I am happy to pass it now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:26, 22 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]