Canción Bonita was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Per MOS:OVERLINK, we should not link "the names of subjects with which most readers will be at least somewhat familiar". One of the examples there is "languages (e.g., English, Arabic, Korean, Spanish)".
For the Latin American countries where it reached number one, you should write "reaching number one in 11 countries, including" then mention two of them, for avoiding a supermarket list
"would perform their upcoming collaboration at the" → "were set to perform at the" plus move this to being the sentence before the one about the April 2021 performance in promotion
It was before releasing the song and somehow Billboard mentioned the song's release date to make happen before the ceremony.
"about this collaboration:" → "about "Canción Bonita":" plus this should be moved to being the last part of the section since he said it after the title was revealed
"Also, Martin told Hola News about it:" → "Martin told Hola News about the song:"
"revealed the song's name" → "revealed the song's title"
"shared the artwork for the single on their social media and announced" → "shared the artwork, and announced"
"and marked the first collaboration" → "marking the first collaboration"
"of the chorus, which features Colombian and Puerto Rican beats." → "of the song's chorus, which features Colombian and Puerto Rican sounds." on the audio sample text, plus remove the ref since the musical styles are sourced in prose and the sample is used to showcase the chorus as featuring them
Add a source that specifies the song is Spanish language, plus People does not back up it being Latin pop per WP:STICKTOSOURCE; change to pop or use a different source
"explains its material as "a bit" → "analyzed that the song is where "[a] bit"
"described it as "a song that is not" → "said it "is not"
"Lyrically, "Canción Bonita" which translates" → "Lyrically, "Canción Bonita", which translates" plus why is the English title listed as "Beautiful Song" in the lead when the translation is "Pretty Song"?
"and is a true celebration of the island as a love letter to the country." → "and serves as a true celebration of the island and a love letter to it."
"is described as" → "was described as"
"The single mixes the desire to start over with the summer, and becomes" → "The lyrics mix the desire to start over with that of the summer and become"
"It also emphasizes the desire to travel to exotic and colorful places," → "The desire to travel to exotic and colorful places is also emphasized,"
The lyrics quoted are not properly backed up by the source even when it has been left in original language; maybe quote ones it actually mentions
@Rodney Araujo: Thanks for working on these parts of the article but thus far, you've missed quite a few issues and I've pointed out where these are. My advice for the future would be to check after saving the article that you've implemented the intended suggestions, also I look forward to seeing your responses for the rest soon! --K. Peake07:09, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"In his review for Mitú, Lucas Villa commended the track, saying: "As the song’s title suggests," → "Villa said that like it is suggested by the song's title," plus put more of this review in your own words per WP:QUOTEFARM
Italicise La Nación
Maybe add a few more reviews to be closer to universal acclaim?
Remove the two days and five hours part unless you can add a source for it
"on the chart,[23] and" → "on the chart and" moving [23] solely to the end of the sentence
"The following week it climbed to its peak at number 23." → "The following week, the song peaked at number 23 on the Hot Latin Songs chart."
"with most top 20s on the US Latin Pop Airplay chart, with" → "with the most top-20s on the Latin Pop Airplay chart to"
[31] should be solely at the end of the sentence
"top 10 hit" → "top-10 hit"
"Besides the United States, "Canción Bonita" peaked" → "Outside of the United States, "Canción Bonita" experienced commercial success. The song peaked" for a correct introductory statement
The Monitor Latino chart should be directly after the number one positions for countries since it may be a continental ranking, but is still the same position and representative of various Latin American countries
"It also reached the top 10" → "The song further reached the top 10"
K. Peake, Rodney Araujo, where does this review stand? It's been on hold for a month, and while there haven't been any edits from the nominator since the following day, آرمین_هویدایی has made quite a few edits since then which may address some of the issues raised and in any event will need to be checked against the criteria. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:51, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@BlueMoonset: Regards. I created the article and almost wrote the whole article by myself. But it wasn't actually ready to be nominated, I knew that I have to still find more references for some parts and I knew that since the song is still new, I should update the charts and probably add accolades soon. That's why I did not nominated it. With respect, I don't get it why the nominator even nominated this article, while they haven't contributed to the article at all! And now, even after the review they don't fix the issues. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 06:23, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@BlueMoonset: I would be fine with آرمین هویدایی taking over and fixing the issues instead of the nominator because the latter seems to be inactive, but I'll ask the user do they want to take over or should the nom just be failed since آرمین هویدایی is not too confident in this nomination. --K. Peake07:09, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
K. Peake, it turns out that this was an out-of-process nomination: nominators who are not significant contributors to the article are supposed to consult with those who are on the article's talk page prior to nominating (in part to see whether there are significant omissions or other issues where the article falls short of the GA criteria). Under the circumstances, I would follow آرمین هویدایی's wishes, whether they want to continue the review with them working on the article, or simply to close it now. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:48, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, my plan was to nominate it in a few months, probably later this year. If you agree, close it for now and I would re-nominate it in a few months. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 19:32, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Not done --K. Peake 07:09, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
Done. Rodney Araujo Tell me - My contributions 21:24, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
Partly done it still has not been moved to promotional info --K. Peake 07:09, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
Comment: why has this now been changed to "Beautiful Song" in the body too? --K. Peake 07:09, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; got cracking properly with the review today! --K. Peake 20:54, 12 June 2021 (UTC)