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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 19:32, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I've picked up this review. Looks pretty good, just a few comments and suggestions:

  • lead: link Texas, confluence
  • History: link/define Tejas; 2000 census; gated community
  • "oddly shaped Piper Lakes" what's odd about their shape?
  • should give metric conversions for distances
  • "Carancahua Bay is protected by the State of Texas" would protected area be a useful link here?
  • 300 member -> should be hyphenated
  • link pH
  • link shrimping
  • "save for a small slither of water" should this be "sliver"?
  • "believed to contain 33 Billion Cubic Feet of natural gas" why the capitals? (and needs metric conversion)
  • "to develop ten reserves in the area" what is a reserve?
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all concerns.--William S. Saturn (talk) 22:39, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think the article meets all the GA criteria, so I shall promote it now. Sasata (talk) 23:31, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]