Talk:Cartman's Mom Is Still a Dirty Slut

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Former good article nomineeCartman's Mom Is Still a Dirty Slut was a Media and drama good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 15, 2011Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Spiceitup08 (talk contribs count) 19:53, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Will be starting soon. --FeuDeJoie (talk) 19:53, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ok so a few things have caught my attention the screenshot in the infobox's rationale is incomplete and incorrect.
  • The introduction is too small and is need of a copy-edit.
  • Saying that the entire article needs a substantial copy-edit.
    The plot is too long, and is very static to read. Grammatically parts are incorrect, generally it is pretty bad.
  • A lot of the material is unsourced and needs to be sorted!
  • It gives absolutely no information into the reception!

Overall

  • I am placing this article on hold, if you do manage to to revamp the article I will give it more time than the initial week I am currently placing it on hold for. It is very messy, unsourced, generally a lot of problems! --FeuDeJoie (talk) 20:00, 8 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    No responses, so im going to fail this one. --FeuDeJoie (talk) 22:07, 15 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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