Talk:Cary Cronenwett

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Peer Review[edit]

You did a great job being as concise and informative as possible in this article. The tables used are especially well-done, particularly the personal information one at the beginning. Citations are used frequently and appropriately. There is also a great deal of information for his two films Maggots and Men and Peace and Mind which is a great addiction. It would be a good idea to look for similar information on his other works, in particular for the film you mentioned in the intro Sexperimental 90s about his role in the film. I would recommend adding direct links in the article so that it can be connected to other wikipedia pages.

Tillercat (talk) 03:02, 10 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review[edit]

This is a really great article with a lot of well structured information. This article showcases that you have conducted a thorough range of research because it shows a lot of strength in the sections where you have gone into depth regarding Cronenwett films. By doing this it gives the audience a sense of the themes in his work as well as his cultural and political viewpoints which appear to be extremely evident in his films. The table is a really helpful tool in presenting his films, to improve on this I would suggest putting the films in chronological order. Another improvement would be to alter some of the sentence structure to make the article flow more easily. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5WDXRMMF4 (talk • contribs) 17:58, 15 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]