Talk:Category 6: Day of Destruction/GA1
GA Review
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- From the "Plot" section, is it Lexer, Lexar, or Lexas. All three are used in this section, so consistency is needed.
- This sentence is confusing: "During shooting, special effect supervisor Craig Weiss noted that the films with Dennis Quaid were particularly difficult to capture on film due to Quaid's multiple scenes being chased by twisters and surrounded their destructive aftermaths." Should that be "scenes with Dennis Quaid? "Twisters" is too colloquial, so "tornadoes" would be preferable. "surrounded their..." doesn't flow properly. Do you mean "surrounded by"?
- "Daily Variety found the film to be full of cliches and side give the appearance" is confusing. What does "side give" mean?
- The article mentions that three storms are approaching from the north and south. If one of the three is coming from Las Vegas to Chicago, wouldn't that be from the north, south, and west?
I will place the review on hold to allow for these concerns to be addressed and/or discussed. Any comments or questions can be placed on this page, as I have added it to my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 17:49, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- All items have been fixed. Can't believe I missed those two sentences. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 18:06, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Everything looks good to me. And when you work on an article for that long, it's only natural to let a few typos slip by. It happens to me on almost every article I write, no matter how much proofreading I do. I will promote the article to GA. Great work! If you have a chance, it would be great if you could review an article as well to help reduce the backlog. GaryColemanFan (talk) 23:01, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Awesomeness thanks! And thanks for reviewing so quickly! I was expecting to have to wait weeks. I'll try to get in to do some reviews...I used to do them quite often, but the backlash when I couldn't pass an unqualified got to be too stressful and I stopped for a long while. Came back doing the occasional GAR, but haven't done any GANs in awhile. -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 23:37, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
- Everything looks good to me. And when you work on an article for that long, it's only natural to let a few typos slip by. It happens to me on almost every article I write, no matter how much proofreading I do. I will promote the article to GA. Great work! If you have a chance, it would be great if you could review an article as well to help reduce the backlog. GaryColemanFan (talk) 23:01, 4 October 2008 (UTC)