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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 19:36, 12 September 2013 (UTC)
Very strong, love the pictures.
- The major issue is that you at some points consider "Boletus hypochryseus" a separate species, and at some points list it as a subspecies. The same with "Chalciporus amarellus". If there's controversy, obviously, say so, but currently the article reads oddly for it. If they are varieties, then a mention of morphological characteristics and distributions would be helpful.
- Ok, I've treated both as varieties following the lead of Index Fungorum, who seem to be following the opinion of Klofac 2006. I've mentioned the differing opinions in the taxonomy section, as well as morphological characteristics and distributions in the appropriate sections. Sasata (talk) 05:14, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
- "piperatus is derived from the Latin word piperatus" It's not really derived from, it's the same as. How about "French mycologist Pierre Bulliard described the species as Boletus piperatus in 1790.[2] The specific name, piperatus, means "peppery" in Latin." (This also cuts down on repetition.)
- "and there is yellow mycelium at the base" There are yellow mycelia, surely?
Here are a few thoughts being picky:
- "on another fungus" What, just one? Even if it's only one other species, I think "fungi" would be best.
- "offshoot" Jargon
- "was made a variety of C. piperatus in 1974" I don't like "made"- if you don't want to repeat "reclassified", you could try something like "described as", "demoted to", "recognised as" or "consigned as"? I particularly like "described as", as this avoids taking a position on the (you suggest) contentious question as to whether it is a species in its own right.
- "arrangement where the outermost hyphae" How about "arrangement in which the outermost hyphae"?
- "native Myrtle beech" Why caps? Is it named after a person called Myrtle?
- "pp. 106–07" and "p. 451:2" catch my eye.
And, if I was really being picky-
- "Described by Pierre Bulliard in 1790 as Boletus piperatus, it is only distantly related to other members of the genus" Someone not familiar with binomials may reasonably ask "What genus?"
- "The genus Chalciporus was an early offshoot from other boletes in the family" Evolutionarily early or taxonomically early?
- You've got two very short paragraphs- try to lose them if you're looking at FAC.
- "Rubinoboletus rubinus" You mention where the other similar species are found, but not this one.
- Again for FAC purposes- could you perhaps explain precisely how mycoparasites live?
- The chemistry section is currently a little opaque.
Sources look fine. The variety/separate species thing is the only real issue; other than that, it's a great little article. J Milburn (talk) 19:36, 12 September 2013 (UTC)
- You've dealt with the actual issues; the rest I'll leave hanging as pointers if you're considering FAC. (As an aside, and I'm guessing you're just having to follow the sources here, but it's surely unlikely that the variety is mycorrhizal if the species as a whole isn't.) Great work, as ever! J Milburn (talk) 09:52, 13 September 2013 (UTC)