Talk:Charles J. Turck/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Nominator: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 16:01, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Hello, I'm going to take this article as part of the July backlog drive. I should be done in a couple of days at most. Kimikel (talk · contribs) 23:16, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@PCN02WPS: Did the source spot check, will do the rest later. Some small issues but overall nothing disqualifying. Kimikel (talk) 21:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[24]: actually belongs to a book: [1]. Citation should be adjusted accordingly
- Thanks for pointing this out - fixed citation format. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:11, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
[38]: does not support text. It can only claim his was the longest as of 1997, not as of 2024.
- Added a citation with a list of past presidents to the current day. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:11, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
[34]: verified
[39]: does not say anything about their marriage being in 1914
- Added citation to verify exact date. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 16:11, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
[16]: verified

Awesome, will get to the rest today or tomorrow Kimikel (talk) 18:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@PCN02WPS: This is my full review. Honestly, I didn't catch much that needed to be corrected. Please let me know when you've had a chance to implement my suggestions. Thank you! Kimikel (talk) 01:22, 13 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing on a copyvio check.

"gained it" > gained the school
"There, he worked to distance..." > this sentence uses a "triple and", i would break it up however you see fit
"broadly favored" > which was broadly favored
"G.I. Bill as" > G.I. Bill, as
"resigned the presidency" > resigned from the presidency

Is there anywhere you can link to endnote 6?
"it was not a drastic one" > I feel like this qualifier is kind of unnecessary; a reader can decide if a 20/30% decrease is drastic or not.
"getting back on track with" > realigning with
"effect—complete with 180 signatures—with" > replace tacks with commas
"But this shift" > However, this shift
"consequences:" > consequences, as
"By the end of his term in 1958, the school's enrollment had doubled, ultimately reaching 1,400 students" > it was 1,400 as of the time of his death, not by the end of his term. this sentence implies that it was 1,400 by the end of his term, i would reword this.

[5] brings up a Charles J Turck Scholarship Fund, probably worth mentioning somewhere