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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review should be up soon. Good888 (talk) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

  • Laura San Giacomo and Enrico Colantoni were linked twice.
  • done
  • "since their show Just Shoot Me!." I am not too sure that . is needed.
  • done

Synopsis

  • Optional, but try to add citations if possible. I know from the Manual of Style that it is not required but it helps!
  • Citations to what?
  • Perhaps ref 11?
  • Should rape be linked?
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  • Since this is Parker’s first mention, it should state her full name.
  • done
  • "A woman asks Keith to investigate her husband, who may be having an affair." Should have meanwhile at the start of the sentence.
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  • Can fraternity party be linked?
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  • "and presents an evidence." An evidence?
  • oops.
  • "Keith and Harmony flirt." Erm expand on this?
  • done

Arc significance

  • I am not too sure this section is needed. It already states this in the Synopsis.
  • Removed

Production

  • Matt Czuchry was already linked earlier.
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Reception

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  • "Television Without Pity gave "Charlie Don't Surf" a "B+"." Can you expand this a bit?
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  • "Reviewer Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode" I think the readers would already know Sepinwall is a reviewer considing this is the reviews section. Perhaps you could say: Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode on his blog What's Alan Watching.
  • done

References

  • Used Checklinks and found no problems. Yup it does say one is broken, but that was archived.
  • Ref 1 needs its publisher.

Placing on hold for now. Good888 (talk) 11:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]