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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 10:39, 25 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 10:39, 25 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

General

Fix the dead links first and follow a single reference style. Some of the references have dates like 2015-01-21. Please follow a style like 25 July 2013. (Looks better). — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 03:56, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 07:33, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Not yet, there are still more. Follow the reference style I mentioned for all the references. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 08:48, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I missed out on three of them, but I think it's okay now. Ethically^Yours! 09:00, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

For those with authors, write the references in this format - Rachel Saltz (8 August 2013). "Taking the Fast Train to Win a Mob Princess". The New York Times. Retrieved 9 August 2013.

For those without authors - "Review: Chennai Express is a rollicking trip to nowhere!". Rediff.com. 9 August 2013. Retrieved 26 August 2013.

For those without publication dates - "Chennai Express (2013) International Box Office Results – Box Office Mojo". Box Office Mojo. Retrieved 11 September 2013. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:14, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

~~Working~~ Ethically^Yours! 12:04, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Ssven2: Done All issues addressed. Ethically^Yours! 17:13, 28 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Newspapers should be in italics. Reference no #6 and #66, use of Twitter for GA is inappropriate (even though it is by Taran Adarsh and Vishal Dadlani respectively). Find another source. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 03:58, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 07:46, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reference no #2 has the website labelled as Firstpost.com whereas ref no #26 has labelled it as First Post. Fix them both as Firstpost. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:00, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 07:46, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reference nos #25, #27 and #35 are unreliable. Find better sources. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:03, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Replaced. Ethically^Yours! 09:15, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reference no #93 from SBS.com.au - Is there an article for the website on Wikipedia? If so, wikilink it. If not, remove the source. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:07, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done SBS.com.au is Special Broadcasting Service, Australia. Added in ref tag. Ethically^Yours! 09:15, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Change reference nos #150, #151 and #155 to the reference style I mentioned in this review. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 07:14, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Partly done I don't see any need to change 150, 151, but I've done 155. Ethically^Yours! 09:11, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, my bad, it is #152, #153 and #157. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:24, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 09:41, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Production

Development

"About 68 minutes of footage were augmented with CGI by Reliance MediaWorks" — What does "augumented" mean? Can you replace it with a more understandable word? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 08:46, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"This would be Padukone's second film opposite Khan" — Change "would be" to "was" as the film has already released. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 08:46, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"to play Deepika Padukone's aunt" — Just "to play Padukone's aunt" will suffice. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 08:46, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"but dropped the idea later." — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: I have changed the sentence. Ethically^Yours! 08:46, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

But still, is there a source which explains that she is not in the cast? If yes, add it. If not, just remove the entire part regarding Manorama (as it was just a speculation/rumour then). — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:26, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Removed. Ethically^Yours! 09:41, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Other personalities from Tamil cinema, include Delhi Ganesh and Mohan V. Raman, appear in minor roles." — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 08:46, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Filming

"additional filming was done at Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus railway station with a minimal crew." — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:55, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 09:07, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Usually, IMDb is not an appropriate source, bro. Here is a better source. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:32, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Placed. Ethically^Yours! 09:41, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"In January 2013, a shoot was supposed scheduled to take place in Ooty, but since Khan felt that Ooty was too far from Mumbai, several locations from Ooty were reconstructed on the outskirts of Panchgani in Wai by art director Narendra Ruharikar. " — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:55, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 09:07, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"The lead actress finished shooting on 25 May 2013" — Change it to "Padukone finished shooting her portions on 25 May 2013" — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 04:58, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 09:07, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Soundtrack

"The score of Chennai Express was composed by Amar Mohile; the songs were composed by the duo Vishal-Shekhar, and the lyrics were written by Amitabh Bhattacharya and Yo Yo Honey Singh." — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 17:20, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Recording of the songs began in late October 2012. The track "Ready Steady Po" was recorded in November 2012 by the music's composers. Several sources said that the director and actor were unsatisfied with the score. The director was reportedly asked to plan for a different musical composition." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done No change required. Ethically^Yours! 17:20, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"The song "1 2 3 4 get on the dance floor" was released as a promotional single on World Music Day. On 27 June 2013, the video promo of the song "Titli" was released, and on 11 July 2013, the promo video of "Kashmir Main Tu Kanyakumari" was released. On 19 July 2013, T-Series uploaded a song to its official channel on YouTube; sung by Honey Singh." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: I don't see any actual need for referencing that line. I don't find any source for that, but at most I can link the official video links with the lines. Ethically^Yours! 12:15, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

By all means do so. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 15:27, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Placed. Ethically^Yours! 16:27, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"On 25 July 2013, a promotional video of the song "Tera Rasta Main Chhodoon Na" was released." Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 12:15, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

Trim some of the quotes and explain the critics's opinion of the Soundtrack album. Can you do this for IBNLive and Rediff.com? For Rediff.com, it sounds as if it is focusing only on SPB's song. It is best if you rewrite Rediff.com's statement. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 06:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done IBN Live and Rediff done as needed. Ethically^Yours! 12:39, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Release

"Chennai Express was scheduled to be released in non-traditional international markets. In Peru, it was the first Hindi film to be released on the same day as in India." — Source? — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Marketing

"A platform running game titled Chennai Express: Escape from Rameshwaram, based on the film and featuring Shahrukh Khan & Deepika Padukone, was developed by Disney UTV's digital wing, and launched on 24 July 2013 for Android systems." — is this explained in reference no. #53? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done No change required. Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"The agreement was linked to the film's box office revenue—the first deal of its kind in Indian cinema." — is this explained in reference no. #58? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"The film had its television premiere on 20 October 2013, and was seen by a record number of viewers, almost doubling that of the highest rated fiction show. — is this explained in reference no. #59? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done No change required. Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Legal Issues

"Along with Once Upon ay Time in Mumbai Dobaara!, Chennai Express was initially abandoned by Pakistani distributors and exhibitors because four of their[who?] films were released on the same day." — Rectify the "who?" sign and source the sentence. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Is the 3rd paragrpah of the section explained in reference no. #65? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 16:37, 29 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

Trim some of the quotes and explain the critics's opinion of the film. You can do this for The Indian Express and Zee News as per WP:QUOTEFARM. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 06:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done Ethically^Yours! 12:55, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Box office

Nothing wrong here. Use the INR template, not the INRConvert one as Rupee value changes. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 06:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure as to how to use that. INRConvert lists a of params but INR has no parameter values. Maybe if you could just help? Ethically^Yours! 12:55, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

For example, the line "The film collected ₹292.50 million (US$3.5 million) on its opening day" Can be written as "The film collected ₹ 292.5 million on its opening day". I have done it for you. Do the same for all the INRConvert templates. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 15:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Ssven2: I don't see any apparent need to change them. It's the US $ values that may change (and that's better); the INR value remains constant, as provided from the markup. Ethically^Yours! 16:07, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, it's not a big deal anyway.

— Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 16:47, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Records

"Television premiere viewings" is unsourced. Please source it. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 06:38, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Partly done I have removed the entire record as I did not find any RS. Ethically^Yours! 12:25, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

That's ok. This part is settled according to my opinion. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 15:28, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. Has an appropriate reference section:

B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
Pass or Fail:

@Ethically Yours: The article's improved to a great extent and passes the criteria. Congratulations. — Ssven2 ^{speak 2 me} 16:47, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! This is my first GA! Hurrah! Ethically^Yours! 16:53, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]