Talk:Chess boxing/GA1

GA Review

• Format references per WP:CITE/ES
• Cut down on external links per WP:EL
• Remove period in image caption per WP:MOS#Captions
• Expand lead to better summarize entire article per WP:LEAD

Gary King (talk) 02:00, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

• "Chess Boxing World Championship, Chessbase News, 5 December 2003" is not using cite web is it? Appears to be citation; use one template or the other but not both.
• "Kirsan Ilyumzhinov As A Chess Boxer!, FIDE" – no accessdate
• Any ref for "If a contestant does not make a move in the chessround, he will be issued a warning by the referee. At the second warning the contestant will be disqualified."?

Gary King (talk) 19:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Done. JoshuaZ (talk) 20:09, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

There are too many small paragraphs in " History" causing it to not flow well. Gary King (talk) 20:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Condensed now. Is that better? JoshuaZ (talk) 20:36, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Looks better. Passing Gary King (talk) 20:39, 18 July 2008 (UTC)