Talk:Chris Wilkinson (architect)

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Former good article nomineeChris Wilkinson (architect) was a Art and architecture good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 12, 2022Good article nomineeNot listed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 10, 2022.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that British architect Chris Wilkinson redeveloped Victorian-era industrial gasholders in Kings Cross, London into modern residential apartments?
In the newsA news item involving this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "In the news" column on December 20, 2021.

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 00:54, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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5x expanded by Ktin (talk). Self-nominated at 03:59, 20 December 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • Hi Ktin, review follows: article 5x expanded from 16 December (I make 6597 characters compared to 1322); article is well written and cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources; most sources used are online so I ran it through Earwig, which didn't flag anything concerning; hooks are both interesting (I love these gasholder conversions, I used to work near three huge ones in Birmingham, now sadly slated for demolition); I didn't see the second hook fact about the inspiration from a watch in the article? a QPQ is also pending - Dumelow (talk) 06:05, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks Dumelow, these are fascinating indeed. I added a sentence into the article, please have a look and let me know if that works. The sourcing of the watch portion is to the FT.com article. I like ALT1 because it has everything about ALT0 plus a watch :) I will work on the QPQ and share an update. Ktin (talk) 06:16, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Ktin, yep, that's grand. Let me know when you have a QPQ. Cheers - Dumelow (talk) 06:32, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your patience @Dumelow:. Completed QPQ (updated above). Please have a look when you are able to. Ktin (talk) 20:55, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Ktin, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 21:05, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:26, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 19:57, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nominator: Ktin (talk · contribs) at 23:34, 3 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments[edit]

Prose
  • Do we know the death location?
  • Citations are usually not required in the lead, as it repeats the info already present in the article (WP:LEADCITE). Is there any reason for having those two citations in the lead?
  • "He was known for his" — This arises the question: "According to whom?". If multiple source back up this assertion, something like "He was widely known for ... " might work.
  • Do we have anything to link to techno-centric design?
  • Write full "Order of the British Empire" in the lead.
  • Our article calls "RIBA Stirling Prizes" just "Stirling Prize" (same comment for the prose as well)
  • Maybe "back to back" should be "for two continuous years". Is that better?
  • The lead should have a bit more about his career.
  • "Wilkinson was born" — specify full name on the first mention in the prose
  • We name his mother, but not his father?
  • "He graduated with a degree" — Do we know which degree?
  • "During this period he took" — specify whether 'he' here means Wilkinson or Lasdun.
  • "joined Norman Foster's firm" — no need to repeat the full name again, just surname would work
  • Add a comma after 'Michael Hopkins'
  • "with Richard Rogers's " — no need to repeat the full name again, just surname would work
  • "on the London Underground's Jubilee line extension." — should be "Jubilee Line Extension" (in title case)
  • "for Dyson Institute of Engineering and Technology" — missing the definite article
  • "The English newspaper The Guardian wrote about the work" — Just a optional suggestion: Newspaper's don't write, correspondents do.
  • "in Rotherham, won the firm a RIBA Stirling Prize." — why comma?
  • "across the Tyne" — specify 'River'
  • Add a comma after "blinking bridge"
  • "the Guangzhou International Finance Center a skyscraper in Guangzhou in China" — should be "the Guangzhou International Finance Center, a skyscraper in Guangzhou, China"
  • "at University of Exeter" — missing the definite article
  • "in Kings Cross, London into" — missing MOS:GEOCOMMA
  • "His publications include Supersheds, an exploration of the history and evolution of large-volume universal spaces" — This was partially previously mentioned.
  • "working with" — If the source gives liberty, it should be something like "working usually with"
  • "Wilkinson married his wife Diana (née Edmunds)" — 'his wife' should be removed.
  • Link supermodel
  • Avoid one lined paragraphs.
  • In the section: "Select architectural works", I'd suggest to write the buildings and work names as a bulleted list instead. And use few images, such as Gardens by the Bay, Guangzhou, etc. along with the text in the Career section. Just an optional suggestion.
Images
  • Caption for the lead image would be helpful, specifying when was it pictured (if known)
  • NFMR seems fine.
  • Suggesting to add ALT text.
  • Rest images seem fine; you're lucky that UK has freedom of panorama!
References

Overall it has a few formatting issues:

Spot check
  • Ref#3a: OK
  • Red#3k: OK
  • Ref#15: OK
  • Ref#16: OK, text is a bit similar but that appears to be a case of WP:LIMITED
  • Ref#20: OK

General discussion[edit]

Hi! I'll review this article as a part of the June 2022 backlog drive. Feel free to let me know if you have any questions or need clarification for any point. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:56, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:57, 18 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for these very detailed notes Kavyansh.Singh. I am running a tad busy in my offline world. Will address these questions when I can sneak-in some time. If I could get some time for these edits, that would be much appreciated. Thanks again. Ktin (talk) 03:35, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No rush, just a quick nudge, Ktin. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:19, 4 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
About a month ... I'm afraid I'd have to fail this. Feel free to renominate after making the changes. - Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:26, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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