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Reviewer: CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk · contribs) 13:10, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this soon.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk (We are the champions, my friends) 13:10, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • There are too many images.
  • The first image in the lead could be replaced with a better picture.
  • Image caption names i.e. Ganga Prasad Pradhan should be wikilinked.
  • Prayer at a Nepali church. -> Prayers
  • Christianity is, according to the 2011 census, the fifth most practiced religion in Nepal -> Christianity is the fifth most practiced religion in Nepal according to the 2011 census?
  • but proselytization and conversion were still legally prohibited. This needs clarification.
  • Fix dashes per WP:MOS. See MOS:DASH. You can use User talk:GregU/dashes.js to assist you.
  • They worked in each of the valley's three city-states. Which three city-states?
  • the king of Bhaktapur, Ranajit Malla, who, one wrote. Is that meant to say who, once?
  • It currently has a staff of around 300. Source says 400.
  • Nepali Catholics have played leading roles in interreligious dialogue in recent decades. interreligious dialogue should be wikilinked.
  • those who actually converted (that is, were baptized). -> converted (that is if they were baptized)?
  • there would be imprisonment of one year -> imprisonment for a year?
  • the Jhapa District -> Jhapa District.
I will have to fail this GA nomination because it contains copyright violations. According to Earwig's Copyvio Detector, it contains 96.3% with confidence.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 15:20, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]