Talk:Christine Hakim

Christine Hakim has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
November 4, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 10, 2011.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Teguh Karya had to fight for Christine Hakim's right to act in Cinta Pertama (First Love) after his producer said her breasts were too small?

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Photograph[edit]

Need to replace her picture with a larger preferably free use/public domain photo and upload it to wikimedia:commons

Mkouklis (talk) 03:51, 10 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Christine Hakim/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 22:49, 3 November 2011 (UTC) I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.[reply]

Disambiguations: none found.

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:51, 3 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Checking against GA criteria[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
''One of these films was Eros Djarot's 1988 film Tjoet Nja' Dhien, in which Hakim was cast as Cut Nyak Dhien, an Acehnese guerilla leader, which won the 1989 Cannes Film Festival award for Best International Film, being screened in Le Semaine de Critique. would be better split into smaller sentences as the subject becomes confused.

Hakim later described the role as a "huge honour" and "very challenging"; she also credits the role for answering her questions on her identity. confusion of tense.

In producing the film, she chose young director Garin Nugroho for his talent and took the leading role. ungrammatical.

''Aside from acting, Hakim is also a documentary filmmaker. . ungrammatical

She has also begun producing a documentary on the Dayak people of Kalimantan When, be specific.

~~The prose could do with a copy-edit throughout to improve the flow.~~

I've done a copyedit. Hopefully it is up to par now. Crisco 1492 (talk)

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Sources appear WP:RS.

~~The bibliography should be reserved for books, The news sources would be better served by using the {{cite news}} template.~~

Done Crisco 1492 (talk)

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
reasonable coverage
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
NPOV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
Stable
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Two images used, but the Julia Roberts image at an awards ceremony does not add any thing to the article.

Gone. Crisco 1492 (talk)

Overall:
Pass/Fail:
On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 23:28, 3 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I think it passes muser now, happy to list as a good article. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 02:10, 4 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot! Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:53, 4 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the review. I will start working on the issues you have spotted. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:30, 3 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]